I want to stay the same with the storyline, but I think that it would have more of an impact of it opened with him waking outside. This means some change in my Treatment too!
A man lays still in the cold, wet gutter. His hand reaches for a wine bottle. He begins to stir, but does not wake entirely. He rolls over, clearly unhappy and hungover he tries to get back to sleep but disturbed by the surrounding mess, he gives up and decides to slowly attempt at a new day.
He slowly leaves his messy house, and goes for a walk down the road in an attempt to get better, both emotionally and physically. He reaches into his otherwise empty wallet and gets out a photo of someone, sighing showing his regret for his previous actions. He slumps, continuing to walk almost dragging his body up the street, he reaches out a cigarette, but finally decides to give up. He begins to head home.
